I watch her as behind her eyes go beyond illuminated, dancing
With mischief and mirth freed from their hiding place
For now she is free to be, as simple or complex as that makes her
She is only allowed this time by sheer chance
Yet I see her essence escape and glide effortlessly
Talking, laughing, dancing in her most ethereal form
I ache to tell her that this self needs to be made free without censure
Know she wouldn’t believe me and tamp her flames down to nothing
So I watch
And it is a joyful sight
But a tiny part of me cries, knowing that this part of her is hostage
Only because she is told to keep it hidden from sight
She sees ordinary, I watch a rare beauty a natural beauty
I told her once she was beautiful and she thought I mocked her
Then it dawned I meant my words and she said I was kind
But she really knew
Her limits didn’t include beauty
I don’t know if she fully believed when I told her she was truly beautiful
When she allows her spirit freedom her beacon shines
Maybe that’s what he’s afraid of?
He’s terrified of something
Ailsa
©AilsaCawleyPoetry2015
He’s terrified that she’ll see the better beyond the captor. Just my own two cents. Very nice poem, hopeful while implying the current poor situation.
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Thanks. I like to see others view, and actually it is fairly spot on 🙂
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Your most welcome. Glad is was on topic. 🙂
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Most definitely. I like to watch people and how they are with others. I’m plain nosey 😀
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People watching is a special delight. It gives much to think over. Conversations in the mind, patterns to track, emotions to play out, as if, living a peice of others lives.
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Exactly! As in this piece I sat and wondered the what if questions, that maybe she has or hasn’t thought. But I shall never find that out. Darn it!! 😉
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Unfortunately (sometimes fortunately) watching never produces experience, but gets us close.
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There’s certainly a great deal to know about this topic.
I love all of the points you made.
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Thanks kind of you to comment 🙂
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